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Treasures & Temptation
I was lying in bed, looking out of my window, through the lace curtains and the lovely wooden box that once belonged to my grandmother came to my view. It is tucked infront on the windowsill. I remember when I got this beautiful box that has such lovely detail, such craftsmanship, I had no idea it would be full of items, trinkets, memories of past, perhaps secrets and it inspired me to write a poem.
Secrets and magic might lie within, or
stories and revelations.
“Can I open it, should I open it,
what will be in it, I want to,
no I need to, I really must know!”
Tingly butterfly wings enliven young tummy
as fingertips stroke wooden veneer.
“Oh the exquisite sight of such a box”
“Oh the skillful beauty to behold”
“Surely secrets &
magic must lie within?”
A vessel to keep mysteries invisible.
Not for inquisitive fingers.
Not for a child like me,
“But, but” my petulant mind argues.
Whining now heard in tone.
“No! No! Not until your older.”
“Permission is not granted.”
“You will not find today what lies within.”
Sighs and retreats from temptation.
Lowered lashes gently flutter,
just like THOSE butterfly wings.
Curtailing the orbs of curiosity.
Treasures now merge in to obscurity.
© Justine @ Itisalonelyplace.wordpress.com
inspiretheworld2day said:
I’m intrigued
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It's a lonely place said:
Oh yes there was mystery and treasure inside 🙂
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inspiretheworld2day said:
That’s really neat
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It's a lonely place said:
Thank you 🙂 I am slowly feeling more confident writing poetry x
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Mara Eastern said:
I love this one: it is intriguing for sure but very touching. I never knew you’re a poet!!
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It's a lonely place said:
I’m not sure I am a poet but sometimes something fanciful comes out of my mouth hehe glad you liked x
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Tracesofthesoul said:
Oh Justine, you are such a natural poet!! I love this..it flows so nicely and the image and mystery within…well, just beautiful!
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It's a lonely place said:
He he thank you and….gasps there were trinkets inside 🙂
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Tracesofthesoul said:
Bonus!!
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It's a lonely place said:
Hah yes x
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alexraphael said:
Love this!
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It's a lonely place said:
That tickled me pink I’m glad it’s received well x
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Lori said:
You are good at writing poetry!
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It's a lonely place said:
hah thankyou, it’s almost virgin territory so I get a little embarrassed or nervous every time I post one 🙂
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Lori said:
Well, you do a great job….you are a gifted writer! I look forward to reading more of what you write in the future!
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It's a lonely place said:
thank you 🙂
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